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Sneeze Section => Writer's Den => Topic started by: A pretty cool guy on February 11, 2018, 01:29:08 AM

Title: [F+Anthro] 9 o' Clock Worries
Post by: A pretty cool guy on February 11, 2018, 01:29:08 AM
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Title: Re: (F+pollen+pepper) 9 o' clock worries
Post by: Furry-Sneezes on February 11, 2018, 10:10:15 AM
Nares, huh? Had to look that one up. Had never heard it used before.

There's a fair bit of stray typos and formatting mistakes, but mostly pretty minor. An interesting take on setting a public scene. There's a few too many animal types for my personal tastes, but as a fetish story that's a non-detail. Enjoyed the story well enough. Good sneeze spellings. Decent stray details. Still reads like a sneeze fic, but let's face it, most anything Slice of Life will read like a sneeze fic if there's enough sneezing in it. :P

First story I've read around here in a while. Thanks.
Title: Re: (F+pollen+pepper) 9 o' clock worries
Post by: TikoPiko on February 11, 2018, 03:50:28 PM
Hey nice story, it's pretty well detailed :).
Title: Re: (F+pollen+pepper) 9 o' clock worries
Post by: A pretty cool guy on February 11, 2018, 07:01:32 PM
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Title: Re: [F+Pollen+Pepper] 9 o' Clock Worries
Post by: TikoPiko on February 11, 2018, 10:50:35 PM
Very good story  :).