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[F + Anthro] The Morning Stuck Sniffles
« on: November 14, 2017, 10:31:21 AM »
I am not an expert writer so I did my best when I made this sneezefic.

This is basically about PomInk (my fursona(in her point of view)waking up with the stuck sniffles. It has a bit of inducing and some mess towards the end. I am really not descriptive but I did my best.

I hope you like it
Today was a very sunny day. Rays of sun shining through the window blinds. I slowly sat up, yawning. Waking up from sleeping. Before getting out of bed, there was a weird sudden itch in my nose. I inhaled deeply and took a few sniffs to make sure the itching was clear. I got up and off the bed stretching, and walked out of my room. The sudden itch has returned. I stopped near the bathroom door to take some sniffs and rub my nose with my finger. My nose started to twitch. I sniffed more until I start hitching quietly.

"Aaahh... Aaahhh..."

My nose wiggle around a bit as I hitch every breath.

"Aaaa-hhh.... AaaaHH-"

...The sneeze went away and I let out a relieved sigh. 'I shouldn't be getting sick,' I thought to myself. Though I don't feel sick... Must be the morning sniffles. My nose twitches and wiggles around again. I sniffed repeatedly until I feel a sneeze kick in.

"Heh... Heeehh.. *sniff*... guh... "

It went away again... I hate this feeling. I hope that it doesn't keep going for the whole day... I proceed to walk into the bathroom and grabbed my toothbrush. As I reached for the toothpaste I stopped. The sneeze was kicking in again. I sniffed deeply and shake my head to get rid of it and proceed to brush my teeth. Once I finished, I walked to the living room with the itchiness, the twitching, and the wiggling returning.

"Wh-wh-whyyyy d-doehh-heh.. *sniff*... does this ha-hah-have t-t-tuh-tuh-to.... *sniff sniff*... ugh..."

Couldn't finish my sentence with this stuck sneeze. I rubbed my nose and thought about what to do with this itchiness. I walked to the kitchen and went to the cabinet and grabbed the pepper shaker. I looked at it for a bit and placed my finger under my nose from another stuck sneeze kicking in.

"M-Might b-buh-be a ba-bah-haaah-ahd idea... *sniffs* But I r-really want this s-sneeze to go away for now.."

I moved my finger out of the way and I slowly move the pepper shaker close to my nose. It starts to twitch and wiggle again. I moved the shaker side to side as I sniffed the strong smell, burning my nasals a bit. I hitch at some points but no sneezes. I decided to open the shaker and placed my nose over it and inhaled deeply. My eyes start to water as I squint them along with my nose twitching as I hitch.

"Aaaaahhhhh... Aaaaaaaahhhh.. *sniff sniff sniff*... Thiii-thiiih-hih-his.. b-bu-burrns.."

I feel my mouth opening from breathing in and closing from breathing out. Nostrils flaring, big to small and small to big. I teased my nose by moving it around with my finger. My mouth opened again as I closed my eyes.

"Aaaahhhh.... Aaaaaaaaahhh.... Hah-hah-ah... AaaaaaAAHHHH!!.. "

With all that build up, I lift my hand up to catch my sudden...

"TCCHEEEEEEWWWW!!!!"

I felt the moisture of my saliva on my hand along with my runny nose. I pulled my head back to look at my messy hand and groaned a bit. I thought it was over until another sneeze kicked in.

"AaaAAHH-TCHEEEEEEW! And another. TCHEEEEEEEEWWWW! Huh... AH-TCHEW! *sniff sniff* WaaaaAAAHHH-TCHEEEWWWW!!!... Ugh..."

I opened one eye a bit and rubbed my runny nose groaning with droopy ears. I put the opened pepper shaker down on the counter and walked to the bathroom to clean the mess on myself and the mess in the kitchen sniffling..

The End
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Re: [F + Anthro] The Morning Stuck Sniffles
« Reply #1 on: November 16, 2017, 02:58:45 PM »
Wow!! :D That was actually really good! Very descriptive, and loved the buildup and suspense. Nice job!

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Re: [F + Anthro] The Morning Stuck Sniffles
« Reply #2 on: November 17, 2017, 12:40:36 AM »
Wow!! :D That was actually really good! Very descriptive, and loved the buildup and suspense. Nice job!

Aaahh thank you! ;u;
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Re: [F + Anthro] The Morning Stuck Sniffles
« Reply #3 on: November 17, 2017, 04:27:15 AM »
Awww, what a cute little story. It really got to the point(if you know what I mean). I love it!
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Re: [F + Anthro] The Morning Stuck Sniffles
« Reply #4 on: November 17, 2017, 05:52:23 AM »
Awww, what a cute little story. It really got to the point(if you know what I mean). I love it!

Thank ya, glad you love it!
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