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Offline megacycle

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[F] The Power of Hypnotism*
« on: March 18, 2012, 01:44:24 AM »
(A new story. I hope you all enjoy.)
(please read, review, and comment.)

East city. It was once a small town, but with all the talented furs there it slowly began to grow and grow until it was one of the largest city in the world, rivaling Vegas in size and odd entertainment.

The sun was just starting to set.

A golden furred mare with sky blue eyes, wearing a light blue cocktail dress, walked hand in hand with an albino furred husky with pink eyes, wearing a pair of dark brown dress shoes, black dress pants, and hot pink button down shirt. Hooves clacking on the concrete side walk. She was giggling like a school girl as he told her about the time he had to pull weeds out of the mayors wife's flower garden as a punishment. Only they never showed him the difference between the weeds and the plants that had not bloomed so he ended up pulling them all. He ran away when he saw that the woman was about to blow a gasket. He got chased by the security guards for a whole hour before finally getting caught. The only reason he got caught was because of a small squirrel biting him on his ear causing him to fall out of the tree he was hiding in.

She was laughing so hard as he told the story that she could hardly breath. She squeezed the canines arm tightly to keep her balance. “So what did they do to you once they caught you?”

“They made me paint the fence around their home. Unfortunately they had a really big yard with a picket fence around the perimeter of it. I spent at least a whole week painting.”

They soon arrived at Trevor's, the albino husky's, apartment building. He held the door open for Cindy, the golden furred mare, like any gentlemen would do. He entered right behind her and took her hand. He led her over to the elevator at the end of the hall. He allowed her to enter first with him not a second behind her. He pressed the third floor button then leaned back next to her on the handrail bar at the back of the elevator opposite the door.

Cindy couldn't help asking the canine next to her a question that she has been dying to ask. “You know, Trevor, we have been dating for over a month and you have yet to tell me what you do for a living? So what do you do?” The mare twirled a long strand of her platinum blonde mane with a single finger nervously as she awaited an answer.

Trevor scratched the back of his head, ruffling his already out of control hair. “If I tell you, you will only laugh at me.”

“No I won't.” She said before bending down, giving him a great view of her cleavage, and stealing a kiss from him, pressing her long snout against his shorter muzzle.


Yes. She was taller then him by a head, but secretly Trevor always liked his women bigger than him. It was one of many kinks that he has.

Cindy nodded. “Yes, I promise.”

“I am a professional hypnotist. I hypnotize people for a living every night, Monday through Friday at a casino called, Deuces, Jacks and The Man With The Ax.” He answered quickly.

The elevator dinged and the door slid open before she could respond. He grabbed her hand and led her to his apartment. He fumbled for a second with his key's before he got the door open. He pulled her in and pushed the door shut with his foot.

Cindy didn't know what to say. She didn't believe in hypnotism. Heck. She remembered telling him that when he asked what her thoughts on the subject were. Her answer: hypnotism is nothing but a load of hogwash. A joke. There is no way you can hypnotize a person by staring into their eyes or make them watch a golden watch swing from side to side. Now here she was in the apartment of a hypnotist. She felt bad for saying all those things about hypnotists. What really confused her was why he continued to date her after she said all that about his career.

The husky led her through the short hallway, where he slipped his shoes off, and entered the main room of his home. A living room kitchen combo. The only way to tell where one began and the other ended was where the carpet and linoleum met. The room was mid-sized with a loveseat setting right on the edge of the carpet and a long couch setting with it's back to the wall. Right behind the love seat was a small kitchen table built to comfortably seat four and right behind the kitchen table was a stove and kitchen counter. The counter ran a few feet from the stove on each side. He sat down on the loveseat and gestured for her to sit down next to him by patting on the cushion.

She sat down next to him. She looked him in the eye and quickly apologized. “I'm sorry about what I said. I'm sorry I insulted your career by saying it was a load of hogwash.”

“No need for that. I really don't care if you think its real or not. I was just afraid you wouldn't go out with me if you knew.” He said while looking into her lovely eyes.

“Why would you think that?”

“Do you know how many times I have been laughed at or even feared?” He chuckled while shaking his head from side to side. “Apparently women are afraid that I would hypnotize them and make them do things they were not comfortable doing and stuff like that.”

Cindy giggled at that. “Well they were stupid to let a stud like you go.” She straddled him and leaned down so her wide equine nose was touching his pink, wet canid nose.

Trevor blushed, but moved forward so their lips could touch. Time seemed to come to a halt as the two shared a passionate kiss. They panted. Cindy could easily see the pink glow shine through his snow white fur. He reached up and brushed a long strand of her hair out of her face and tucked it behind her ear. He then rested his fingertips on the side of her long snout.

“I must be the luckiest man in the world.”

She winked. “You are.” and kissed him again. “It's going to take a lot more than that to get rid of me. After all we know hypnotism is fake.”

“Actually it is real.” He answered

“Funny, but I don't see how you could hypnotize someone like me.”

“Would you like to put that to a test?” Trevor asked with a glowing grin.

“You can try, but you won't hypnotize me.”

“We will see about that.”

He stared into her eyes, concentrating on making her his slave. They stayed in that position for at least five minutes.

“Like I said, you can't.. hypnotize... me.....” She grew quiet and her eyes lost their normal warm glow.  That could only mean one thing, that it worked. He had hypnotized her. Now how to make her realize she has been hypnotized. He could make her do something embarrassing. He thought about it. Their was one thing he had always wanted to see her do. Sneeze. The whole time he had known her she had never sneezed in front of him. He decided to make her sneeze anytime she heard certain key words.

“Cindy. Your mind is mine and my word is law. Whenever you hear the words lovely or beautiful you will sneeze. Do you understand?” Trevor said as he stared into her eyes with out blinking.

“Yes. I will sneeze whenever I hear the words lovely or beautiful.”

The husky grinned when he heard her say that. Now to put his handy work to the test. “Cindy, Awaken.”

She blinked a few times and stared down at him from her position, straddling him. “See. You couldn't hypnotize me.”

“You were right, beautiful. I could not do it.”

Something strange occurred. Cindy felt a sudden tickle form in the back of her nose. The mare's nostrils flared wide. “Ah... Aah-heh-” She shuddered, closing her eyes and tilting her head back. She rocked forward with the powerful release, sneezing wetly on Trevor.


Oh god! She blushed deeply. How could she have sneezed on him. This was so embarrassing. She got off of him and sat down next to him. She faced away from him as she gave her nose a quick rub. “Sorry about that. I don't know what came over me.”

Trevor had that deer in the headlights look when she had sneezed on him. It was so wet and sexy. Especially the way her large nose and snout scrunched and wiggled against her will.

“No need to apologize.” He said. Trevor scooched over closer to her and held her hand. Their fingers intertwined. He quickly straddled her waist and held both her hands in his. “Anything and everything you do is beautiful to me. Even your sneeze.”

She couldn't stop herself from blushing. Suddenly her nose gave a violent twitch. Oh no. She could feel another sneeze. This one was coming even faster than the last. She had no choice but to close her eyes and let it fly.

“Ah... AAH-HAP'tSHieW!”

A fine mist shot out and hit the canine in the face. He took it without even a flinch and he loved every second of it.

“Bless you.” He pulled a white handkerchief from his breast pocket and offered it to her.

“Thanks.” She blushed again, rubbing the tissue across her wide nose. “I really don't know what's causing me to sneeze?”

He smiled. He knew exactly what was causing it. A little hypnotic suggestion. He gently kissed her on the nose then told her in a teasing tone. “I do. Would you like to know, my lovely, lovely lady?”

“Yes.” Cindy answered before succumbing to two more unexpected rapid fire sneezes. “HeP'tsHew! HieP'tSheW!”

“Hypnotism.” Trevor said dramatically. She stared in disbelief at what he said.

“Trevor, Trevor, Trevor. I already told you, you can't hypnotize me.” She said with a shake of her head.

“Well since you still believe that then I won't undo what I did.” He got off of her and sat down next to her placing his head on her shoulder.

“Their is nothing for you to undo. Remember!”

“Okay.” He looked up to her. “Ready to watch the movie, beautiful?”

“HeP'tSheiw!” She gave her nose a quick rub and nodded.

He smiled and grabbed the remote from the pouch that was built into the side of the loveseat. He turned on the TV and switched it over to the DVD player's input. He flipped a switch on the remote and turned the player on and started the movie. Cindy rapped an arm around Trevor and held him close.

Unknown to her that by choosing not to believe would lead her down a long road of sneezing and sniffling. But it may not be all bad. Trevor will enjoy listening and watching his beautiful lover sneeze on command, whether she knows it or not.

Trevor gave her hand a loving squeeze and said, “I love you, Cindy, my beautiful mare.”


He felt her body tense, her hand squeezing his a bit tighter.

“I love you too, Trevor.”
« Last Edit: July 05, 2014, 08:09:05 AM by Furry-Sneezes »
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Re: [F + Story] The Power of Hypnotism
« Reply #1 on: June 24, 2014, 05:06:15 AM »
I loved this! sad I just found this. would love to read more.

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Re: [F + Story] The Power of Hypnotism
« Reply #2 on: June 24, 2014, 11:18:05 AM »
Dang!  I forgot about this one.  I read it a while back.  Why I didn't leave a comment, I don't know. :P  Nice job megacycle!  Great detail and well written.  Always a fan of your work. :)

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Re: [F] The Power of Hypnotism*
« Reply #3 on: August 29, 2014, 11:46:36 PM »
I remember this one. I think I might have...*thinks* this was in March and I left in July. I may have helped correct some spelling, but that isn't important.

I loved this story! :D I think it was a cool anthro story that had a nice few twists to it.

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Re: [F] The Power of Hypnotism*
« Reply #4 on: November 28, 2014, 02:30:54 AM »
Ok, now I wanna learn hypnotism so I can do this to people. Great story  :D