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Unarchived Stories / Re: [F + Mature] Alice, Fruit Bat*
« Last post by oneofthree on April 21, 2018, 04:58:55 PM »
Four years later, I realize there's a typo in this and fix it.
Yeah all right.  Thanks for all your hard work.
Atlas was at the movies with his sisters and his babysitter, he felt really stuffy,he had a bad cough, he was sneezing, and his throat hurt slightly, he didn't feel his best, didn't really occur to him that he was sick. The 12 year-old malamute stood in line with his sisters and his babysitter waiting for their tickets to be checked so they could head into the movie theater. They all sat down after they got their tickets checked, Atlas felt a tickle in his nose causing him to sneeze "hshoo hshoo hshoo!" he blew his nose on one of the tissues he had with him, he had a quiet coughing fit from the force blowing his nose caused, he just then noticed how seemingly cold in the theater it was, he felt cold, despite the fact that he was wearing a sweatshirt, and had long pants on, he couldn't stay warm, he was coughing almost constantly, he needed to blow his nose at a minimum of every 4 minutes, he was starting to get tired, he laid down across another seat that was next to him, he shut his eyes trying to relax and fall asleep, but he felt too cold, too stuffed up and was coughing too much to get any sleep, he laid there for about 20 minutes, he felt miserable, he couldn't really follow the movie plot, as he was too preoccupied dealing with his symptoms and he couldn't fall asleep, he sat back up for a little while trying to wake up, he sneezed again "hshoo hshoo hshoo hshoo!" he blew his nose for what felt like the millionth time, not even wanting to think about how this looked to other people, he couldn't help it, he couldn't wait to get home
Writer's Den / Atlas and Seven [M/M + allergies]
« Last post by ShilohDog on April 17, 2018, 01:48:55 AM »
Atlas ginger and white malamute with green eyes

Seven blond and white malamute with blue eyes

It was the night of senior prom, Atlas and Seven were quite enjoying it, they were both dancing and having a good time.

Atlas sneezed "HSHOO HSHOO!" he sniffled

"bless you, baby" Seven said

"Thanks, my allergies are getting to me a little bit" Atlas replied before sneezing again "HSHOO HSHOO HSHOO!"

"bless you, what's making you sneeze so much?" Seven asked

Atlas sneezed again "HSHOO HSHOO HSHOO HSHOO HSHOO!" he sniffled "don't know he said, not noticing the rose in Seven's tux jacket pocket

"bless you, you should blow your nose, here" Seven said handing Atlas a handkerchief

Atlas blew his nose

"better?" Seven asked

Blowing his nose seemed to have made it worse, he sneezed again "HSHOO HSHOO HSHOO HSHOO HSHOO!"

"bless you!" Seven said

"Thanks" Atlas replied, his eyes looked at the flower in Seven's suit pocket "oh... you have a flower in your suit pocket, that has to be it" Atlas rubbed his nose and sniffled

"oh I'm sorry babe!" Seven said, he took the flower out of his suit jacket pocket and threw it away, they weren't gonna let that ruin their night.

The End let me know youre thoughts

"bless you
Art, Art, and Art! / Re: A Bouquet for Delaney [F + Mature]
« Last post by Y31 on April 16, 2018, 06:05:17 PM »
General Chatter / Re: Do you like "urgent" sneezes?
« Last post by Y31 on April 15, 2018, 09:42:09 PM »
Yes!  :D

I like some long buildups as much as anyone else, but desperate sneezes and fits are nice too, and a little underrated if you ask me.
Art, Art, and Art! / Re: [M + Fox + Cold + Messy] Nick Wilde and Houseguest
« Last post by Retrofan191 on April 15, 2018, 07:05:58 PM »
I also love how urgent his sneezes are in the last page. Like how he just knows there's no chance of keeping them back and they just explode out of his nose. Makes me think that cold is really torturing that poor nose.
Later, everyone was at home in bed with boxes of tissues and bowls of soup. So we head on over to Keswick and Chubster's house to see the two geniuses in bed. Chubster just came out of the bathroom after vomiting. Lucky for them, they acid-proofed the whole house, including the toilet. They were tired of Chubster melting the toilet away after each release.

"*aAhChOO!*" Keswick blew his nose.

Chubster writes: Dad, can I have some more soup?~ "*hKscHnK!*"

"sh-shuh-Sure, Chub-*AhChOO!* *HihChOO!* *HahpscH!*" Keswick sniffles.

Chubster blows his nose and writes: It's okay, Dad, I'll get it.~

Chubs makes some more soup, and re-enters the room. As he sets one bowl down, he makes it to his bed, but...--


The chubby alien scientist sneezed some of the soup right onto Keswick. Keswick shakes the soup off his fur. He was lucky that the acid didn't get on him.

Chubs writes: Sorry, Dad!~ The chubby alien coughed.

"It's okay,--*AhChOO!* Chubs." Keswick sniffled before drinking his soup.

A few minutes later, Keswick sees his clone moving his arms around.

"ch-chuh-Chubster, what are you doing?" Keswick coughed.

Chubs writes: Take that, bad guy!~ The genderless, chubby genius appears to be sticking his arms out at nothing.

Keswick tilts his head as Kitty called on his wrist com.

"Hi, Keswick. Hi, Chubster." The feline coughed. "How are you feeling?"

"n-nuh-Not so-*HihChOO!* g-guh-g-guh-good.. Chubster thinks he can control the e-e-elements.." Keswick explained blowing his nose.

Chubster writes: Look, I can waterbend!~ He sticks his paws out at the bowl of soup.

"Oookay.." Kitty sniffed.

Keswick snickers weakly before coughing. "So, what about you and Agent Puppy?" Kes sniffed.

"We are getting a little better, but Dudley is throwing up in my shoes.." The cat growled a bit but coughed.

"Bleh!" The dog barfed.

"Gross!.." Kitty groaned.

"*AHCHOO!*" Dudley sniffed as Kitty sipped some soup.

"Agedt Puppy, why ared't you at your owd p-peh-peh-place?" Keswick sniffled.

"He wouldd't leave because he's--*AhChoo!* too sick to dribe hobe." She blows her nose.

Soon, King and I were on our wrist coms, but I was asleep. King tapped the screen, and everyone else just shrugged.

"GIGGLES!" Everyone yelled.

"AAHH--*AahChOO!*" I yelled waking up with a runny nose.

"You disgust be, hyeda." The lion coughed as we saw his teenage son walk past.

"Hello, g-guh-Giggles." Keswick sniffled.

"Oh, What's up, guys? King has a son?" I coughed.

"Bobby (Mommy), who's that?" Huruma asked.

"*EhChOO!*" Kibaya sneezed.

"Awww! You poor sickly cubs.." Kitty mewed then coughed.

"Hi, Udcle Keswick! Hi eberbody!" Kibaya sniffled.

"*AhhcH!*" Huruma paws at her nose.

I clean the cubs' noses before feeding them. I then notice Chubster 'being weird'.

"Ookaaay, what is he doidg?" I questioned before snickering and blowing my nose.

"Chubster's hah-hah-hallu--ah..hallucin---ahh... *AhChnkscHOO!* hallucinating." Keswick explained.

"It's kidda fuddy!" Dudley laughed before coughing.

Soon, the Chief came on the wrist com. He had red eyes while the rest of us had dry noses since he didn't have a nose.

"Hey, Chief." We all greeted coughing.

"Hello, agents." The chief coughed.

"hhh.. hh.. *HpscH!* *HpChwH!*" Chubster sniffles as the acid landed on his screen causing everyone to gasp.

"d-duh-Dod't w-weh-*AhcH!* wuh-worry, guys." Keswick sniffled. "We acid-p-puh-puh-puh-*AhChOO!* proofed his wrist com.

"Gross!" Dudley said.

"Hey, you barfed id Kitty's shoes, while you're talkidg." I sniffled.

"How did you kdow that?" The dog questioned.

"I was just turdidg od by wrist cob whed you had the--*AHHCH!* codversatiod." I blew my nose.

"Cober your dose whed you sdeeze, hyeda." King complained.

"*AhChOO!*" Keswick sniffled and blew his nose.

Chubster coughs and writes: I don't feel so good..~ "*HcHnX!*" The chubby, genderless alien scientist ended up sneezing all over himself.

"D'aww, bless you." Kitty coughed.

"Seriously, does DO ODE cober their doses whed they sdeeze?" King complained.

"I know right?!" Chief agreed.

Everyone sniffled and blew their noses.

Art, Art, and Art! / Re: The Problem With Pepper (M, anthro, canine)
« Last post by tarotgal on April 15, 2018, 06:23:05 AM »
Love the paw on the muzzle. Adorable!
I Found Something! / Llama Llama (M+F, Llamas and Sheep)
« Last post by JMQwilleran on April 12, 2018, 03:28:38 AM »
Right, I've been sitting on this for a while, but around of January, Netflix released its animated television series based on the Llama Llama books. Those that follow the books section will likely know about Llama Llama Home with Mama in which both little Llama and his Mama Llama are home sick with a cold. Well, the television series adapts the story for the television format - a bit more realistically too. In this installment, Llama just starting to get over his cold, but is still sneezing and stuff a fair bit and has to stay home one more day. At the end of the story, Mama is coming down with it.

Llama Llama - 12:18, 11:42 (three in a row), 9:43 (held sneeze, and hilarious face as he does so), 9:31, 9:25 (also seen in the show's intro) 7:26

Mama Llama - 2:19, 2:13 (three in a row, rapid-fire), 2:02 (four in a row this time)

We've also got "Sleepover at Gilroy's" - in this one, Euclid (a sheep) is up late with allergies.

15:17, 15:11, 15:07, 15:02 (offscreen), 14:59

Note - all times listed are times remaining in the respective episodes rather than the time into them, because that's how Netfix displays it to me. Also, as far as I know right now this is only on Netflix, being a Netflix Original - I don't know of any other place to find it, other than that the theme song is here - and here's a clip of "Home With Mama" here - - but I believe with only one sneeze.
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