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[F + Mature] Elephant/Feather*
« on: May 10, 2009, 05:46:40 AM »
Well, I said I'd do it and I did.  I wasn't really inspired, I just kind of forced myself to do it, so it's probably not very good.  That poll at the top of the feather thing said people most wanted feathers and sexiness, so there's a bit of that.  Not really 18+ material, but I'll label it as such anyway.
If this is liked, I will write a sequel sometime, and it will probably be very 18 plussey.  I'm not very good at describing physical attributes, so bear with it I suppose.
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Re: [F + Mature] Elephant/Feather
« Reply #1 on: May 10, 2009, 02:24:33 PM »
Bravo!  ;D It's a great story, many thanks for writing it!

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« Reply #2 on: May 10, 2009, 08:37:04 PM »
dont mean to be a pain..but by any chance could you post it here? for some reason the download doesnt want to work on my computer...and it sucks..lol...so yeah id appreciate that
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Re: [F + Mature] Elephant/Feather
« Reply #3 on: May 10, 2009, 09:29:24 PM »
loved the story!

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Re: [F + Mature] Elephant/Feather
« Reply #4 on: May 10, 2009, 09:43:16 PM »
dont mean to be a pain..but by any chance could you post it here? for some reason the download doesnt want to work on my computer...and it sucks..lol...so yeah id appreciate that
Well, it's two pages long... I don't know if it will fit.  Also, if I post it like that, nonmembers can see it, and I like forcing people to register  ;)
Buuuuut maybe.
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Re: [F + Mature] Elephant/Feather
« Reply #5 on: May 10, 2009, 09:49:52 PM »
...................come on..............im the one who got that thread going again though, too... :P

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Re: [F + Mature] Elephant/Feather
« Reply #6 on: May 10, 2009, 09:57:51 PM »
Fine.  I'll send it to you in a message  :)
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Re: [F + Mature] Elephant/Feather
« Reply #7 on: May 11, 2009, 03:56:41 AM »
Lol what you say is true, I laugh at the large number of people to have logged in today. :3

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Re: [F + Mature] Elephant/Feather
« Reply #8 on: May 11, 2009, 03:59:35 AM »
Not too shabby, for a short story! ^^ Elephant sneezes are always fun. Anthro or not, lol.
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Re: [F + Mature] Elephant/Feather
« Reply #9 on: May 11, 2009, 04:18:34 AM »
What was the tally, F-S?
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Re: [F + Mature] Elephant/Feather
« Reply #10 on: May 11, 2009, 06:24:33 AM »
Users Logged In Today - Total: 25 (Visible: 23, Hidden: 2)

With like, 2 or 3 of those being new members. XD I hope they take the time to say hi, just lurking is no fun! :O
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Re: [F + Mature] Elephant/Feather
« Reply #11 on: May 11, 2009, 07:11:22 AM »
Whassup with the sudden small influx of new members? X3 (Not that I really mind..)

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Re: [F + Mature] Elephant/Feather
« Reply #12 on: May 11, 2009, 11:06:07 AM »
hey thanks alot for the pm and great story! :P i know i wouldnt mind seeing a sequel if you ever do consider it

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Re: [F + Mature] Elephant/Feather
« Reply #13 on: May 11, 2009, 01:49:19 PM »
*lurker-emerges* Create content and they shall come, eh? ^^

Certainly a solid story.  It perhaps drew a little too heavily on the cliche of the school bitch, but it still worked quite well.

But, arrrgh, why-oh-why in .doc format? Why not RTF or PDF or, better yet, HTML? Anyway, I've taken the liberty of producing an HTML version and have attached it to this post; I hope you do not mind. (Note that I have not vetted it for UTF-8-only characters and have thus needed to declare it as UTF-8 in a meta http-equiv tag. This *should* work fine, but I've only tested it in Firefox.)

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Re: [F + Mature] Elephant/Feather
« Reply #14 on: May 11, 2009, 07:10:57 PM »
Well, it's .doc because I created it in microsoft word... and I have never posted anything to a forum before, so I don't really know how to change it.  You'd think after all this time I'd have figured it out but... nope.
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Re: [F + Mature] Elephant/Feather
« Reply #15 on: May 12, 2009, 04:15:20 PM »
Not bad, hope to see more!

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Re: [F + Mature] Elephant/Feather
« Reply #16 on: May 12, 2009, 10:00:06 PM »
Oh man, that is great stuff.  Much more imaginative than I thought it would be.  Thanks a lot!

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Re: [F + Mature] Elephant/Feather
« Reply #17 on: May 13, 2009, 01:57:16 AM »
Starts chanting sequel..
sequel...
sequel...
sequel... :D

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Re: [F + Mature] Elephant/Feather
« Reply #18 on: May 15, 2009, 05:22:34 AM »
Just a warning, I will be A) trying much harder on the sequel, B) it will take longer because of that, and C) It will most likely be filled with sex-type things.
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Re: [F + Mature] Elephant/Feather
« Reply #19 on: May 15, 2009, 07:41:30 AM »
*cheer* you are awesome!