It's a good start, yes. Some good foundation there. One thing I notice from a word search is the lack of utilization of the furry elements. Fur is mentioned once, ears and tail zero times. Try painting a picture of the whole body, and really take that time to show us what you're seeing, what you're looking at. Are we really just zoomed in on the noses only or is there other stuff going on at the same time? That's the type of thing I'll often ask myself when doing creative thinking.
Hope that helps, and don't fret over it if nothing else.
Oh! And welcome to the forum. Thx for pointing that out, Speedweed.
Edit instead of bump: Glad stuff's resolved. :3 Always better than being angry at each other or being disrespectful.
