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General Chatter / Re: Monster Hunter based Sneezefic
« on: April 18, 2019, 03:18:58 PM »
Alrighty, so the deadline has arrived... and with the "amazing amount" of votes (Endless gratitude to the people that actually voted xD)
We have a winner... and that is Legiana, the Frozen Beauty of the Coral Highlands!
So hopefully, by the end of my vacation, I should have my first official story on this website up~

Hooray! X3

Well, it's a bit sad to see how few people voted, but fortunately it was sufficient enough. Not a lot of people are that active these days. But I'm sure there are still plenty of readers.

I wish you the best of luck and happy holidays!! :D

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I saw this on Ari's profile, but I didn't know it had come from you. It was a satisying read, and nice details to the wording and buildup. Such a great nose. ^^

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Books and Comics / Re: [Elephant] One piece manga chapter
« on: April 11, 2019, 12:05:25 PM »
To think there'd be something like this XD

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Art, Art, and Art! / Re: [M, Pepper] - Dragon Waiter, At Your Service
« on: April 07, 2019, 06:27:47 PM »
Great expression and nice flaring of the nostrils. :)

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I Found Something! / Re: M- Wolf - "Big Bad Wolf"
« on: March 29, 2019, 12:22:48 PM »
What a classic cartoon buildup~

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The interrogation was done splendidly, all the feather movements were written great! I love those characters too, and how you did the buildup. The letter capitalization on the sneeze buildups are also good. I do think you can improve on some parts, like maybe you should add a '!' at the end of some, if not all sneezes. Reading it without the '!' gave me the impression of the sneeze being weak or plain-sounding. And other than a few mistakes, you're doing pretty well. :)

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;D ;DOMG! Thank you so much!! I'm in the midst of writing some more of it right now  ;)

No problem~ Good luck!

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Ehe, it's a nice read. Always glad to see another new writer around these parts X3 The sneezy speech is great, and your descriptions are quite splendid. Especially the way the feathers move around, the tiger's reactions compliment it well. You've got potential. X3

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I'm New Here / Re: Hello
« on: March 13, 2019, 10:06:43 AM »
Hello  :) Goodbye XD

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Writer's Den / Re: [M + Antro + Destruction] Lucky And The Lion
« on: March 12, 2019, 02:57:02 PM »
I plan to commision more lucky sneezes from him in the future:3

Well, if you have the money, and the need to, go ahead :P

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Writer's Den / Re: [M + Antro + Destruction] Lucky And The Lion
« on: March 12, 2019, 02:09:09 PM »
Yeah mystery did an amazing job! And luckys sneezes are so good hehe

Yes, Mystery is a really great writer. He's done a few for me, though not sneeze related, but still very good in my opinion. His choice of words are really great, and has good pacing too. :3

Yes, Lucky's sneezes are destructively good~

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Writer's Den / Re: [M + Antro + Destruction] Lucky And The Lion
« on: March 12, 2019, 01:49:51 PM »
Ah, I saw this one on DA! He may not be as active as he used to be, but he's still an awesome writer! Love the story, the buildup, the itch, and the sneeze of destruction XD My favourite parts are the car sneeze and the end one. I also really like his use of various sneeze-inducers. :)

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Writer's Den / Re: [F + Mature] Kimberly at the pool
« on: March 10, 2019, 01:47:35 PM »
Great story. Fantastic descriptions of surroundings and the sneeze itself, and it's interesting to see how people around her react. Sneeze stories in public places don't put much description to how people around react, usually it's a close friend or something like that, so it's unique to see it here. :)

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Art, Art, and Art! / Re: [F, Vixen, Pollen] Short foxie sketch page
« on: March 05, 2019, 07:29:50 AM »
I like how you drew the nostrils, they have great detail. :)

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Writer's Den / Re: [M+Yoshi+Possession] Part 1
« on: March 02, 2019, 05:25:39 AM »

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Writer's Den / Re: [M+Yoshi+Possession] Part 1
« on: March 01, 2019, 09:15:09 AM »
Aww, I love yoshi! Great detail, would love to read more

Thank you! There will definitely more, maybe up to part 3 even~ ;)

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Writer's Den / [M+Yoshi+Possession] Part 1
« on: February 28, 2019, 02:40:31 PM »
Haven't been in the writing mood lately, but managed to get something up.

It was another, foggy, soggy day at Lutherberg Manor. This old, abandoned mansion was left be decades ago after a bunch of Boos took over the place. There was a banquet taking place when it happened. Chaos ensued. However, the crisis was averted when the manor grounds were sealed away with a magic spell, leaving the Boos trapped for all eternity within the building’s stone, castle-like walls and wrecked hallways.

One particular Boo watched the rain fall and drip on the window, partly-enjoying the loud trickling sound of hard rain. When you and your family have been trapped in here for many, many years, there isn’t a lot of things to enjoy, as most of the manor’s previous luxury had been stripped away over the times. However, that also meant that you’ll probably find ridiculous and strange hobbies, like staring out the window watching the rain until the clouds fade.

The Boo looked over at the horizon. The manor’s surrounding were rather bare, only grassy hills and a few oak trees. The manor grounds itself - protected by spell-casted iron fence - where the Boos were confined to, didn’t have any greenery whatsoever, as if the boos residing in this place stole all the nutrients and made them wilt. Flowers don’t seem to ever grow in this place. The sun had barely risen, still hidden behind the dark clouds, colouring the sky with a faint light purple hue, with a hint of orange mixed in.

It would that it’s going to be one of those days when nothing interesting happens at all.

Or so he thought when something caught his eye.

A blue Yoshi was taking a nice morning stroll, going at a half-running pace, its large nose sniffing near the ground. It perked up when it saw the manor. It slowly approached, nostrils expanding as it took several deep sniffs of the area. Boo didn’t have a keen smell like a Yoshi would, but it’d probably smell dusty, musky, and of old wooden furniture. He was proven correct when he saw the Yoshi scrunch up his overly-large nose.

But despite that, it still seemed curious, sniffing at the manor’s iron gates. Boo knew that if the Yoshi went past the iron gates, he could probably possess him and escape this sorry place, but there’s just no way that would happen. He intently watched the Yoshi walk around the manor, sniffing as he went. Then the Yoshi noticed a gap in the fence; a few broken iron bars that got damaged in the takeover. Technically, that should mean the spell didn’t cover it, but it did. Although, that still meant anyone who stuck their hand through there would be considered ‘inside’. Boo knew that the Yoshi wouldn’t be so stupid he’d walk right into the manor grounds; there’s literally a sign at the gates earlier that clearly said ‘HAUNTED’.

Then, completely unexpectedly, the Yoshi stuck his huge nose through the gap.

No hesitation required.

Going invisible, the boo phased through several rock solid walls, charging at the Yoshi. Just before the Yoshi pulled his nose out, the ghost managed to get into his body.

The Yoshi leapt backward, surprised at the cold sensation of the Boo entering him, before his vision went dark and he suddenly blacked out, getting pulled into an infinite black void until every sense in his body went numb.

When he reopened his eyes, he was no longer the same Yoshi.

The Boo had managed to possess him.

It took a while for the Boo to register his own self. He raised his blue four-fingered arms in front of him, flexing the stubby fingers. He could feel the muscles work under the skin. He could smell the unpleasant stench coming from the manor. Still not believing it himself, he lifted up his legs, wiggled his toes in his shoes - which he never really understood why Yoshis wear them -  then wagged his tail and stretched his arms all the way to his back. He could feel every muscle contracting and relaxing.

“I-I-I made it!!!” The ‘Yoshi’ squealed excitedly in that familiar high-pitched voice he usually heard, except this time they formed actual words instead of just ‘yoshi yoshi!’. It was probably because he himself is a Yoshi now. “I’m so, so lucky! I can’t believe it!” He ran around for a while, arms flailing like a madman, unaware of the other Boos watching him in confusion. Ah, who cares!?

…What now?

He suddenly felt a bit confused and lost. He successfully possessed the Yoshi. And then…?

He looked at the tall iron fence surrounding the gloomy manor. Thinking about it, he was in a mortal body now, so logically, he should be able to pull the lever that opens the gate from outside. It was the one sole thing that stood between the boos and freedom outside. Now it was a literal arm’s reach away.

He jumped up and grabbed the lever, pulling it as hard as he could, pushing against the gate for leverage… yet nothing happened. It didn’t move a budge. Maybe it rusted over the years. At this rate he’ll never be able to open the gate…

An idea popped in his mind. If him alone isn’t enough, he’ll just rally a bunch of other Yoshis! Easy!



“It’s been an hour…” Boo groaned, his long, sticky tongue hanging out of his gaping mouth. He was practically dragging his feet across the grass now. He wiped his brow, which was covered in sweat. He never realized it was so HOT outside. How can people stand this heat!? I guess this is what living in a soggy, rainy manor does to you. “I need to lie down.”

He found himself a nice, empty patch of field where there was nothing but grass there. He laid down on his belly there with a small ‘thump’, his arms spread out as he enjoyed the feeling of grass tickle his arms. “Hehe, it’s fun being ‘alive’ again.” He murmured, remembering his ‘mortal days’. “I kinda missed this.”

He didn’t know what he had been thinking after that, but soon enough he was snoring.

A small breeze blew by the fields he was in, providing a nice chilly wind. His large blue nose sniffled a bit as the feeling of wind blowing by the tip of his nostrils tickled slightly. He shifted in his position, sleeping sideways now. His nostrils got a little too close to the grass, and the thin blades brushed at the nostril rims. The normally thin nostril openings widened a bit in response, only allowing the grass to get more coverage over his nose. Swish, swish, just at the edge of his nostrils.

“Hhmrr…” Boo groaned in his sleep, sniffling. That pulled a few loose dirt particles off the ground and straight into his open nostrils. The tiny dirt particles crumbled by the strong force and spread out across his tender nasal walls, the microscopic bits rolling across the pink flesh. Dirt, inside your nose, is rather irritating. His giant nose wiggled a bit, nostrils scrunching. The dirt particles moved around as the inside of his nose quivered. The more his nose reacted, the more the dirt moved, the more itchy it got.

“H-hrr…” His hand shifted in his sleep, as if attempting to rub at his nose before blacking out into comfortable darkness again. His nostrils flared, nasal passages trembled, wanting to get the dirt out, out! He sniffled a few times, inhaling even more dirt particles and even a blade of grass into his widening nostrils, bringing nothing but agitation to his olfactory senses. The single blade of grass swirled around in the cavity, easily tickling the ceiling and ridges of the ticklish walls. With each spark of a tickle up his round nose his nostrils only wiggled and wiggled more…

Boo finally seemed aware of the strange sensation happening inside his nose, lifting himself up. “H-huhh…?” He rubbed at his nose, which felt strangely itchy. “Wh-what is…?” The fact that he had fully woken up meant that the itchiness inside his nose became more noticeable. “H-heaah…”

His large nose instinctively raised up to the sky as he felt a powerful pressure build up at the edge of his nostrils and at the base of his large nose. The dust particles fell backwards, deeper into his sinuses, where his nose was most sensitive, and where every sensation became more detectable and real…

“H-haa… HAAAHH…. GHEAAATCHOOOOOOO!!!” His body snapped forward, nose nearly hitting the ground as a blast of air shot out of his nose, pushing all irritants and irritation outside. Nose still twitchy from the residual microscopic dust bits still stuck inside, it rebuilt that mounting pressure again until - “GHATCHOOOO! H-HYEAATCHOOOOO!!”

Three sneezes in total. Now his round, slightly red-tinted blue nose was fine, still twitching from the unexpected sneezes.

“Wh-what in the ghost world was that…?” He never recalled an experience like that in his lifetime, let alone in his current afterlife. Sneezing, they called it…? He remembered seeing a few Yoshis or Toads having the same reaction when they inhaled too much dust or spiderwebs that stuck on the iron fence. It was so… horrifying… but now… it felt quite relieving. Such a strange force this is; sneezing…

“Uhm, excuse me?”

Yoshi looked up, lifting his large head. There was a pink Yoshi in front of him, blue eyes gazing. “Um… Were you sneezing just now?” The voice was timid and high-pitched, but still distinctly male. There’s a bit of a disconnect for the Yoshi since you’d normally associate pink with females. “Is your nose still itchy?”

Boo - as the blue Yoshi - blinked a few times before standing up, rubbing his nose and sniffling a bit. “Feels clearer now,” he remarked. “And… who are you?”

“Oh, sorry, my name is Raya.” The pink Yoshi gave a short curtsy. “It’s nice to meet you. I’ve never seen you in this part of the field.”

Field? Were there territory divisions among Yoshis? “Er, yes, I was… just curious.”

“Hm…” Raya seemed to be thinking of something to say to the newcomer before his face lit up. “Ah, why don’t you come with me? I’ll show you around. Or would you prefer to meet some other Yoshis?”

Although he’d rather rally up the other Yoshis, Boo thought he needed more time with his new body — and find some exploitable weaknesses — before he gets the help. “Sure, I’ll come along.”

“Great! Come with me!” Raya happily kicked his legs rapidly, hovering in the air for 3 seconds straight before landing back down and running off.

“H-hey! Wait!” Boo then chased after him, wondering what kind of adventures he’ll have with his new body and partner…

(There will be a part 2 and maybe more, don't worry. ;))

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I Found Something! / Re: HTTYD3 - Hidden World - Light Fury sneeze
« on: February 25, 2019, 04:59:27 PM »
Hehe, kinda cute. Love the expression.

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Art, Art, and Art! / Re: More Pre-Sneeze Busts! (F, anthro; canine, skunk)
« on: February 24, 2019, 05:19:08 AM »
They all look good.

And I won't comment about it XD

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Art, Art, and Art! / Re: [N + Werewolf + Mess] Just a doodle
« on: February 22, 2019, 09:37:15 AM »
It looks great. Love the nose~

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