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Offline Daedalus

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[M + Mature] Dante's First Time
« on: November 08, 2015, 07:54:41 PM »
One story that’s been heavily requested for a while now has been an origin story for Dante where he first discovered his unusual ‘gift’.  If you’re not familiar with my ‘Dante’ character, his was the first story I ever wrote for this site a couple years ago called “Dante vs. The Sleepover”.  Most of his adventures are sitting in the “Unarchived Stories” section.
 
Of all my regular characters, Dante is still my favorite.  Especially since he embodies practically all of my fetishes.  That and he’s just too cute! 

 
Dante’s First Time
 
Outside it was a beautiful summer day.  The sun was bright; birds were singing; down the street some cubs were running through a sprinkler and giggling; some neighbors were washing their cars while others mowed their lawns. 

Far away from all this, a young alsatian lay sprawled out on his bed in his boxers, brooding over all the unfair aspects of his life.  Currently at the top of the list was the distinct lack of privacy afforded to him in a house full of females (‘full’ meaning his mom and twin sister) who just didn’t understand that sometimes a guy needs a door with a lock or a private bathroom. 

Dante huffed and sat up.  He was just too restless to even brood properly.  Maybe moving around a bit would take his mind of things.  He paced back and forth, running his paws through his hair and grumbling.  He looked over at comic books he’d read a thousand times before.  He looked over at his Xbox which, without his best friend to play with, just seemed boring.  He glanced over at the computer on his desk and rolled his eyes.  Right now, as pent up as he was, the internet was the last place he should go for entertainment.  He flopped back down on his bed and rolled over on his back and thought about taking a nap until a knock on his door announced the arrival of his twin sister, Cassie.  He mumbled an affirmation to come in and pretended to read a magazine.

“You better not be pawing off in there,” Cassie warned before cautiously pushing the door open and stepping in.  “You know mom doesn’t like it when you shut your d… eww!  Don’t be gross, Dante - put some pants on.”

He flicked his ears, annoyed, and retorted, “It’s my room.  If you don’t like it then leave.”

Cassie sniffed and made a face.  “Well, your room stinks.  When’s the last time you washed your clothes?  How can you stand it in here?  Open a window or something, at least.”

Dante picked up a clump of underwear and socks, threatening to throw it at her.  “Fine.  Whatever.  Go be annoying somewhere else.”  Cassie smirked at him on her way out the door, finally leaving him in peace.  Dante shook his head and huffed.  He gave the air in his room and inquisitive sniff.  Whatever.  It doesn’t smell bad in here.  Well, not too bad anyway.

His nose lead him to a pile of clothes under his bed from the last time he’d gone running with Alex.  He poked his muzzle in them and grimaced.  Yikes.  Okay, maybe she had a point - those shorts were rank!  Fine!  Whatever!  So there was some dirty clothes.  She didn’t have to make such a big deal out of it.

He grumbled and snatched up all the clothes lying about and flung them down the laundry chute in the bathroom before trudging back into his room.  He tested the air again and sighed.  Fine - better open a window I guess.  Can’t have Cassie being all, ‘Oh, Dante!  Your room smells so bad!’  He pantomimed his sister talking while opening up the windows in his room and letting in the warm afternoon air.  Almost immediately, the back of his nose started to itch.

The wind from outside carried the aromas of freshly cut grass and weeds along with a gentle hint of late summer blossoms.  Any one of these would have been enough to set off Dante’s hay fever, but at the moment he preferred the runny nose and sneezing to his sister’s annoying voice.  He flopped back down on his bed and picked up a magazine on motorcycles.

The curtains around his window billowed and swayed.  Despite his best efforts to ignore his own muzzle, Dante could feel the itch in the back of his nose growing steadily.  He sniffled and renewed his resolve not to let this bother him.  He flipped the page and tried his best to get interested in the article on engine tear-downs. 

Dante’s nose was slowly turning a pinkish hue and starting to throb.  He rubbed the bridge of his muzzle and dabbed the front of his moist nostrils with a tissue.  A steady pressure was building in his sinuses.  The itching inside his nasal passages started to give way to a persistent tingle that made his eyes start to water and his nostrils begin to flare out larger, engorged.  He sniffled hard in frustration and turned over to a new position on his bed, finding there was almost no position he could get comfortable in.

Sniffling and blowing his nose yet again, Dante tossed the damp wad of tissue over next to the pile of others.  He flung the magazine across the room and got up to move around again.  The sneezy feelings in his nose grew persistently.  Gaaahh!  Come ON!  Just sneeze already!  Dante cursed at his quivering nose, wishing it would just hurry up and do what it was threatening to do while pacing around and wondering why he felt so anxious all the sudden.

The sensations in his nose started to peak.  Sharp prickles in the back of his nose made his eyes flutter and his breath start to hitch.  All of these feelings, he was intimately familiar with having had allergies as long as he could remember.  But something was different this time.  He felt lightheaded.  His heart was pounding.  He felt warmer than he should, maybe even flushed.  As the gasps of breath deepened and the sneezy tingles grew sharper, he felt a tightness in his tummy.

hhhhihh… hehh… HHEHEHH.. geh… HHEESSHHOOO!!

Dante fell back on his bed and let this odd feeling wash over him.  It always felt good to get a good sneeze out, but this was different.  That sneeze felt almost euphoric.  He grinned stupidly and grabbed another tissue to massage and wipe his runny nose.  He wondered if that experience could be repeated.  Heck, if all his sneezes were going to feel that good then maybe this year’s allergy season wouldn’t be so bad. 

Dante was almost delighted to feel another wave of tingles creep over his muzzle.  He was definitely feeling that warm sensation again.  His ears were probably blushing, but he didn’t care.  He sniffed in the outside air deeply to try and hurry the effect along. 

nnnggg… hihh… *sniff*  hhhh… HEEEHH.. geh.. HIHHIIHH-h-h-h-h… *g-g-gaaassp* eehh… HHEEHH!..  HHEEEESSSSHOOO!!

From downstairs, Cassie called out, “Whatsa matter, Dante?  You allergic to your dirty socks now?”

Dante was only vaguely aware of anything outside his room.  He had a drunken smile plastered across his face as the rather loud sneeze he released left him feeling not just good but amazingly good, yet still rather anxious and restless.  The euphoria faded.  Dante suddenly realized he was so hot he was panting.  His heart was racing with adrenaline.  His nose continued to throb and itch and every sneeze seemed to make his restless desperation grow.  Dante sniffled wetly and silently questioned what was going on.  Even though he only had on a pair of boxers, he felt confined and restricted. 

Comprehension dawned on him.  Dante stopped tossing on his bed and looked down.  His eyes dilated and focused on his crotch.  The fabric of his boxers was stretched nearly to its limit and never in his life could Dante remember being this hard.  The front of his underwear was soaked by a large spot of pre.  Inside his boxers, his cock twitched and shifted involuntarily as if asking permission to be let out.

The breeze from outside ruffled through Dante’s fur.  His nose began to tingle and twitch again as another allergy-fueled sneeze began to swell up.  He felt his breath start to hitch again.  His nostrils trembled.  But this time he ran his paw under his nose and pressed down to stifle the sensation.  He was no longer interested in how good it felt to sneeze.  Now he had a bigger issue to deal with - a raging hard-on and a door with no lock!

The allergens in his nose bore down harder and sent a wave of itchy sensations pulsing through his sinuses making him gasp with stuttered breath.  At the same time, Dante felt his balls shift and twitch.  His sniffled as his nose started to drip - while pre oozed from his painfully hard erection.  His nostrils flared and began to tremble - his cock engorged itself further and strained for attention.  His sinuses began to throb with pressure from all the fluid building up - his balls ached and pulsed with pent up seed.   Every time Dante tried to stifle or resist the urge to sneeze, his erection became harder as the pressure at the base of his dick pushed back.  But there was only so far he could resist the urges of his allergic reaction.

Hhhihhhh.. HEEHHH… nnggehh.. hih…. HHEHH.. HHEEEEYYIIISSSHHIIEWWWWW!!  *sniffle*  hihilhhh-h-h-h  AAHHHHYYIIIISHHIIEWWWWWW!!

His cock wormed its way through the front opening of his underwear and glared up at him, drooling pre everywhere.  Dante stared back in a mixture of fascination and horror.  He sniffled as another wave of sneezy urges tingled in his nose and felt the same sensation echoing in his loins.  Every time his nose twitched, his cock throbbed.  Every time his muzzle began to scrunch up, his balls began to draw up close.  A knock on his door nearly sent him swimming in mid air with a sharp yelp.

“Hey!  Mom says lunch is gonna be ready soon.  You coming or what?” Cassie barked from the other side of the door.

“Y-yeah, almost,” he replied and winced at his poor choice of phrasing.  A new panic set in.  Dante had never felt this pent up before.  His balls felt like they were swollen to the side of grapefruits.  If this kept up, he was sure to explode everywhere.  His nose and his cock started twitching as another sneeze began to press its way into his muzzle. 

Oh, why was this happening?  He pressed his paw firmly under his itch nose and paced back and forth trying to think of anything he could do to make his erection subside.  He tried to picture decidedly unattractive things but a sudden flurry of tickles shooting up his nostrils undid any progress he was making.

Heeh.. hiihhhhih-geehhih-h-h-h-h HEEHH.. Oh n-n-nnnno I c-can’t sss-ssstop.. nnnggg.. hih… HHEEEEYIISSHHIEWW!!  IITTCCCHHHIIEWWW!  HIISSHHIEWWWW!!  EEYIISSHHIEWWW!!... hih.. EHH… AAYYIISSSHHIIEWWWW!!

The allergy attack was reaching its crescendo fast and there was so much pre leaking out of him Dante had to strip off his boxers to use as a rag trying to contain it all.  Dante heard his sister call for him again from downstairs.  He tried to answer but was overcome with gasping breaths as his nose started to flare and tickle again.  The sneezy urges were coming faster and harder this time, pounding on the back of his muzzle.  Pressure was building in his nose and in his groin.  His allergies were too strong to hold back the onslaught of sneezes that were about to erupt out of him. 

Time was against him.  Dante’s muzzle was starting to scrunch up, his eyes watering over.  It was too late to prevent the inevitable.  His breath started hitching and his cock throbbed wildly.  The pressure in his sinuses forced the tickly sensations to spike, making him gasp as the sneezes forced their way out.  He felt the intense pressure of an impending, thoroughly messy, orgasm surging at the base of his cock.

HHEEEEEEEEEEEYYYIIISSHOOOOOOOO!!  hihhhyyyiyhh.. HHEEEEEEEEEEEESSSHHIEWWWWWWW!!!  HHHRREEEEEEEESSSSSHSHHHHHOOOOOOO!!  EEEYYIIIISSHHIEWWWWWW!!!  hih… EYYYIIHH!.. *G-G-GAAASSP*  AAAAAHHHHHHH-SSSHHIIEWWWWWW!!  HHEEEEESSSHHIEWWWW!!  EEEYYIIISHHIEWWWWWWW!!

His paw had instinctively wrapped itself  around his hot, swollen dick.  With every sneeze, he lurched forward, thrusting himself against his own paw and launching a torrential volume of cum splashing across the entire length of his bed.  Over and over, he sneezed violently, expelling the remnants of the allergy-inducing particles from his sinuses.  Each sneeze brought with it another involuntary pelvic contraction and blast of pent up semen. 

Too weak to stand, he collapsed to the floor in a heap at the foot of his bed and gasped for breath, trying to remain conscious.  His vision was clouded over and his brain was swimming in absolute bliss from the most heart-stopping, intense orgasm he’d ever felt.  The allergy fit finally over, his nose began to calm down along with his still twitching erection.  At this point even if Cassie did decide to barge in, he had zero energy left to try and stop her.  Thoroughly exhausted, Dante curled up on the floor and promptly fell asleep. 

From a crack in his doorway, a pair of very wide and dilated eyes slowly disappeared as the door was silently shut.

Dante awoke, naked and curled up at the foot of his bed, wondering if it had all been a bad dream.  He reached up and felt the slushy wetness of his sheets.  Nope - not a dream.  The smell of food roused him from his lethargy.  He threw on some clean clothes and wrapped his bedsheets up in a bundle and sent them down the laundry chute with a sopping wet ‘thud’, hoping no one would ask questions. 

Before joining the others at the kitchen table, Dante grabbed a 2-liter of Gatorade and managed to swallow the entire bottle’s contents before sitting down.  Cassie made every effort to not look in his direction while Dante piled his plate with some fried chicken. 

His mom tried to break the silence at the table and asked, “I’m finishing up the laundry - do you have any loads left?”

Cassie nearly choked on her drink.  Dante blushed and could only reply, “I seriously doubt it.”
« Last Edit: November 08, 2015, 10:40:32 PM by Daedalus »

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Re: [M + Mature] Dante's First Time
« Reply #1 on: November 09, 2015, 03:00:32 AM »
Great story!

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Re: [M + Mature] Dante's First Time
« Reply #2 on: November 09, 2015, 07:28:09 AM »
mm, the classic origin story! :3 i've been waiting so long for this and it was wonderful! dante and evan are my favorite characters in your many series, heheh

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The front of his underwear was soaked by a large spot of pre.  Inside his boxers, his cock twitched and shifted involuntarily as if asking permission to be let out.

heee, i'd let it out. x3 than you so much, dae! =3 you write the best stories on this site! <3

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Re: [M + Mature] Dante's First Time
« Reply #3 on: November 10, 2015, 03:20:12 PM »
Yayy another Dante story!  ;D  Nice to read about the origin of his gift.  Nice job Dae!

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Re: [M + Mature] Dante's First Time
« Reply #4 on: November 14, 2015, 03:05:58 PM »
hehe, such an ongoing saga dante endures x3 i wonder if anyone would ever make an illustration of this fella x3

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Re: [M + Mature] Dante's First Time
« Reply #5 on: November 15, 2015, 08:43:29 PM »
This is brilliant! I loved it. :) Hey, Dae, would you ever consider doing a story about a deer? That would be really interesting! Only if you want to, of course.
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Re: [M + Mature] Dante's First Time
« Reply #6 on: November 30, 2015, 05:59:33 AM »
Great story, loved it. Keep up the amazing writing. I would love the idea of a deer. Great idea pollenpepperlover but, o my if you wanna do it.