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Offline Darkjolteon83

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 I hope you all enjoy part 2.
   Max sighed as she felt the breeze across her face and the sun against her fur. She was at a pool party and had the biggest smile on her face. Amber had loved pool parties and it was about the best time for Max, who felt like she could relax and just sun bathe.
"I love when you looked relaxed babe." Amber approached with a glass of lemonade that she handed to Max.
Max laughed and realized Amber's Trunk and her nostrils flaring and turning red. Max took a quick sip of her drink and moaned softly unable to keep it at bay as her thoughts took a turn for the worst. "Thanks hun. Are you okay? You look kind of irritated of you know what I mean?"
Amber looked at Max." To tell you the truth I feel safer by you right n..nn.now." Amber's voice raised a bit as she hitched and calmed down. "Someome is wearing rose scented perfume and my trunk is tickling but who ever it is doesn't stay long enough for me to sneeze at least."
Max curled her toes at the thought and moaned a bit louder. Quickly placing a hand over her muzzle. Amber looked at her cockeyed. "Are you okay? That moan was a bit too loud for such a short time around me."
Max began to feel nervous as she realized she was losing control faster than most days.
"I'll be fine hun. It's not like I c.. uugghh.." a loud moan escaped Max's mouth as she arched her back. A beautiful woman approached them her fur orange and black striped as Max panicked seeing the younger feline fur the smelled it, the rose perfume.
"Max babe... I'm g..gg..gonnaaahh..AAHHH..AHH.. SNEEZE AAHH..AHHH..AHHHH... AHCHOOOOOOO AHCHOO.... " Amber sneezed and the pools water was drained, but Max had a huge problem as she struggled and was losing in public. "S..SORR..SORRY AHHH..AHHHCHHHHHHHOOOOOOOOOOOO!!"
Max moaned and screamed loudly writhing in the throws of her orgasm. She looked around. Her covers strown everywhere around her. "A dream." She was left panting from her dream, "we have to control Amber's trunk, I fear I might be getting too riled up."

The next morning Max made her way to Amber's house. She called off work, unable to calm herself from her dream. She had infact lost control two more times already.
 "Keep clean thoughts, keep clean thoughts." Max repeated over and over to herself as she walked the full 2 mile walk to her partners house. "Damn I can't believe me out all people are having this problem."
Max had been getting more and more hard to control as her feels for Amber grew. She could feel her control slipping and it scarred her to think about losing it in public or even worse at work. Max's mind was so fearful it started to manifest in her dreams.
Amber just finished a shower and wrapped herself in a large towel. Her mind had been floating back to Max all day. She walked to her dresser and looked at a photo of the two of them. "My lovely. I have a surprise for you when I see you again."
Just then a knock on the door interupted her thoughts. Amber walked in her towle to the front door, " who could that be?" When amber looked through the door hole and saw Max she immediately opened the door, feelings of concern washing over her. "Max is everything ok? I mean your normally at work."
Max kissed Amber and noticed how naked she was instantly. A bit louder of a moan excaped her. "I know im sorry, but..."
Amber held a finger to Maxes muzzle. "Sshhh.. whats wrong?"
"I had a dream." Max spoke bringing her tail between her legs feel scarred to mention it. She hugged her lover tightly and a lone tear left her eye visable to Amber.
It took a while but Amber got the dream out of Max. Amber gave her love a pet and brought her muzzle up so that they could lock eyes. "Hay i have some news for you. You have not moaned once the entire hour you have been here, and i have been naked under a towle the whole time." Amber hugged Max tightly. "I think you have been in conteol too long so you dont know what to do when you lose it."
Max grinned a bit, " but when you have to sneeze or do sneeze it get me to a point of zero control at all." Max said feeling a hit better but thinking of the horrorof possibilities that could occur.
Amber smiled, "my trunk is super sensitive babe and Im allergic to many things. But i can hold back for quite some time." Amber gave a little sniffle out of nowhere, then remembered her morning sneezes she had not let out yet. " i think that after awhile, your pint up self will let go and you will be free of this fear."
Max sniffled one last time and wiped away a tear. " your probably right. I mean you would know. But what if..."
"What if i sneeze or need to sneeze during an outing?" Amber finished Max's thought. "I wouldnt worry about it. I will get strong allergy medication so we wont have to worry. Problem solved."
Max kissed Amber deeply, " thank you babe. You always get me."
Amber laughed and forgot about her trunk tickling for a second, that was untill she smelled something on Max that made her trunk twitch.
Max noticed the uprupt action and placed a gentle hand on Ambers trunk. "Whats wrong babe? You dont have to... "
"AAHHH..AHH..AHHH.." Amber's trunk hitched as she smelled it, "you have AAHHH..AAHH.. P..PPP..PERFUME ON... AAHH..AHH.."
"Oh shit! I must have put it on out of habbit I always wash it off before seeing you!" Max felt her face turn flush as her own build up was starting.
Amber's trunk rolled up as it felt the tickle pierce her sinuses. "AHHGAHHH AHHH... SSKKK..SKKK...SKKKK..." Amber qas trying to hold back but her trunk curled up only when her sneeze forced it to and they always came out huge. "GG..GET B..BB..BACK AAHHHSSKKKK. AHHSKKK.... AAHHHCHHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! AHHHHHCCHHHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! AAHHCHHHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!"
Max tried to move out of the way but ended up a part of the blast, her clothes torn to sheds and her on the floor. "OOOOHHH... Bless you babe."
"Thank you hun. You mi..might want to AAHHH..AHHH..AHH..AHH.. WASH THAT STAAHH.AHH..AHH.. STUFF OFF." Amber could feel another round building, as she watched Max stand up and rush to massage her nose.
"Oh no you dont! Not unless I tell you to." Max was obviously turned on. "We will control this together."
Amber's eye watered as the sneeze was held back. She nodded willing to play this game if Max thought she could last with all the hitching.
"Good. Feeling better?" Max asked as she slowly let go of Amber's trunk. "Now no sneezing."
Amber felt Max's hand leave her trunk. "Max babe you know my aller.. allergies make it ahh.ahh.. hard to hold them back."
Max removes Ambers cloths. "Now it will be hard for me to hold back..." Max felt her urges rise and fall with a shaking breath of her own. "Too."
Amber could see her lovers urges starting to crawl over her. There was no way Max would last. "Babe let me help you." Amber went to touch Max but was smacked away.
"No! If you tease me its not fair." Max looked at Amber this was gonna be hard for her too. Max could already feel the tingle of lust crawling over her body again.
Amber started to move her trunk a bit in hope to quit the tickle in her trunk. "B.bb.babe aahh.. ahhh..ahh.. i feel my trunk cant do this for t..tt.to lo..long."
Max felt her moan creep in, as her body wanted more and more to let this happen. " you have to babe. It will help.. help us." Max almost yet again gave in to her moans feeling a crack in the damn of her lust.
"Your only torturing yourself love. I feel you may b..break be..be.. before i do. AAAHH
AHHH... AHHHH." Amber was lying of course the perfume was getting to her sinuses again. Amber tried to ring out her trunk to control the sneeze but it never worked. "AAHHH.. AAHHH... BABE IM AAHH.AHH.
 GONNAHHH..AHHH SNEEZE!"
Max quickly grabbed Ambers trunk and began massaging it again. Watching as it wiggled a bit in protest then calmed down. Max felt her moan getting stronger, helping Amber made it worse on her end as she managed to keep her lust down again.
Max looked a Amber," I said no sneezing."
Amber's  trunk rested in Max's hands again, but something was happening. Amber's trunk slowly began to move back and forth in Max's hands. Amber felt a rising urge of lust come over her with every Movement her trunk made. Amber heared of this before, but never thought it would happen to her. Her trunk had become a errotic zone for her, and now her sneeze was returning.
"Umm Amber? What's going on?" Max saw Amber's legs starting to shake.
Amber looked a Max. "Babe we m..might have a p..pp.problem.. oohhh... no. We definitely h
.hh.have a problme. AAHH..AHH..AHHH.. AHHHH AHHCHHOOOO AHHCHHOOOO AHHCHHOOOO!!!"
"what is..OOHHHH." the first moan escaped a wav of lust taking Max after doing so well. "What is it babe?"
"My trunk is being.. beginning to.. OOHH GOD...MMMMMMM..." Amber got interuptd as Max massaged her trunk again and a wav of lust rippled through her body. "Beginning to turn me on." Amber managed as the massage felt amazing and almost brought her to her own orgasam.
Max got the seductive eye as she lightly let go of her lovers trunk. "I think we have tortured ourselves enough. What do you think babe?"
Amber felt Max move her hands along her trunk and she began to orgasam from the new feeling. "OH GOD... OHHH..OHHH..OHGOD OOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! AAHH..AHH.
AHHHH..."
Max let out a moan of her own as she realized her lover had just released and was aboit to sneeze again. "never thought i would get you to moan as loud as me."
"THATS BECAUSE AAHH.AHH.. BECAUSE I NORM.. NORMALLY D..DDD.DONT... AHHH..AHH..AHH...AAHHCHHHHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! AHHH..AHH..AHH...AAHHCHHHHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! AHHH..AHH..AHH...AAHHCHHHHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! "
Amber's  sneezes wrecked the room but caused Max to lose her composer and moan.
AAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! Max clasped by Amber.
"Well I think I just found a new way to tease you."
Amber laughed... "will you marry me?"
Max kissed her and smiled, "of couse i will."
The end
 

Offline Zracken3

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Re: Max and Amber part 2 [F+anthro+lose of control+ mature+ explicit]
« Reply #1 on: August 30, 2018, 06:13:47 PM »
   Okay, I guess I'll be first  :)
   I enjoyed it! Can't say I'm too into the explicit side of things, but I'll take huge sneezes from an elephant or anything else any day :D That said, more detail on the mayhem Amber's sneezes caused to things besides Max would have been a plus - but not necessary. Just my own personal wishes.
   Once again, good job on this one! I hope to see more of your stuff in the future.

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Re: Max and Amber part 2 [F+anthro+lose of control+ mature+ explicit]
« Reply #2 on: August 31, 2018, 09:30:12 AM »
May not have liked explicit things, but this was rather mild in the sense. I still liked it.

And although the typos were distracting, it was still readable.
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