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Offline Daphine

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LUMBER JACK SCOOBY!

Nina rolled onto her side as she struggled to catch her breath. She laid there trying to wrap her mind around what had just happened. She thought they
 
were just kidding when they instructed her to report to Sonya if she should happen upon a giant Great Dane. Less than an hour later she had done just

that. Now she was sitting at the bottom of a rabbit hole after the large dog had tried to chase her down. Now just as Nina looked back up towards the

opening and daylight everything went black.
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In the darkness Nina could hear the sound of sniffing and snorting and she could feel blasts of warm air on her scantily clad body. She reached over and

 began to frantically feel for the flashlight she was carrying when she jumped down into the hole. Seconds felt like hours until her right hand bumped into

 her flashlight sending it rolling across the floor. She stopped her frantic search telling herself to calm down, work the problem. Right now panic is your

 worst enemy. She took a deep breath and reached over in that general direction she had heard the flashlight roll and instantly found it. Switching it on she

 cast the beam of light towards the opening she had just jumped down through. Looking up Nina saw that the opening was now completely covered by a

 Hugh black nose. Fear began to take over Nina’s mind. She was trapped!

Scooby Doo knew that the pixie he had chased was now cornered. His highly sensitive nose could smell her perfume right below him. For the first time in

 what seemed like forever he had the upper hand. Had the pixie gotten away from him she surely would have informed Sonya of his presence. Scooby

 knew that as long as he had her trapped in that hole he would be safe.

Nina shined her flashlight in every nook and cranny of that hole hoping to find an alternate exit but there was nothing. All she was able to find was dirt,

 sticks and a pile of old leaves and feathers that must have been bedding for a rabbit at one time. She shined her flashlight sky word again. As she looked

 up her face kept getting blasted by warm air as the large dog continued its sniffing. She watched as the large nose moved with each breath. The large

 nostrils flared and throbbed with each sniff. It was then that Nina had an idea. Turning her flashlight back towards the bedding she began to take it apart.

 She tossed piles of old leaves and tiny down feathers off to the side hoping to find something that could help her. Finally down near the bottom of the pile

 she came across a stiff pointy Seagull feather. It was only 4 inches long but it was old and dusty and perfect for what she had in mind.

Scooby Doo could hear voices coming from far down the hallway. Nina are you around here, did the battery die on your phone again? Scooby just stood

 there perfectly still knowing how important it was for him to remain hidden. Nina held the feather like a samurai sword as she looked up at the large

 nostrils. She timed them, the way they would flair open wide when ever the large black nose inhaled. Finally she pushed the pointy end of the feather up

 against Scooby Doo’s nose. She then began to lightly drag it back and forth across the width of the nose. Scooby‘s entire body stiffened. His ears sprong

 straight up. His eyes Quickly became the size of saucers. Nina continued with the gentle tickling, "What a nosy character" she mocked quoting a Bugs

 Bunny cartoon. She watched as his nostrils quivered and flared and that’s when she made her move. Inserting the pointy tip of the feather up into

 Scoobies right nostril she began to wiggle and twist it around. Scooby Doo‘s body was suddenly covered in a thin layer of sweat. His eyes began to

 tear up as his large nose began to quiver. "Tickle tickle tickle" Nina taunted as she removed the feather from Scooby’s right nostril only to replace it into his

 left. Scooby could feel mucus forming against the walls of his nasal passages this was always a sign that a sneeze was forming. Ro no The poor great

 Dane thought ra rot a reeze! From just outside the hole Nina could hear the beginning of a building sneeze. She pushed the feather deeper into Scoobies

 left nostril which instantly released a strand of mucus. His eyes began to grow heavy lidded as he began to take in large gulps of air RAA, RAAA. Scooby

 bit down hard making a desperate effort to fend off the sneeze. He knew that if his powerful sneeze didn’t alert Sonya‘s agents to his position it Would

 certainly release his little captive. Nina continued to tickle torture Scoobies nose alternating nostrils. His nose now ran freely. It oozed and dripped mucus,

 large strands ran down covering the pixie. Scooby could feel his lower jaw falling slack as his nose began to convulse . It became a battle between Scooby

 Doo‘s brain which ordered him to hold back the sneeze and his nose which demanded relief. The sneeze grew more powerful by the second and Scooby

 could feel his will crumbling. RAAAA, RAAAAA, RAAAAAAA. Scooby could feel his eyes close tight as they squeezed out the remaining sneezy tears. Nina

 now covered in mucus made one last aggressive tickle with the feather. Scooby’s nose could take no more and finally it came

 RAAAACHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

The sneeze hit with such force that knocked Scooby Doo backwards. Nina Quickly clawed her way out of the rabbit’s hole and made her escape, alerting

 Sonya to Scooby Doo’s where about‘s

THE END!   FOR NOW!!
« Last Edit: April 24, 2020, 04:05:12 PM by Daphine »

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This is great.   I love story reenactments of classic cartoon sneeze scenes. 

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Has a nice buildup with good description. :3
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Has a nice buildup with good description. :3
Thank you CC007, I'm glad you liked it ;D.

This is great.   I love story reenactments of classic cartoon sneeze scenes. 

I'm so glad you liked it demosthenes ;D.  This was my version of Lumberjack Rabbit ;D.  Someday Hanna Barbara really need to put Scooby Doo and his nose in this situation  ;D.  Until then I'll just have to ;)

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Re: NEW Scooby Doo Comic & Story, MESSY! Sneeze Torture (M) Nose Stuck Scene!!
« Reply #4 on: September 23, 2020, 07:20:08 PM »
I know I'm late, but I wanted to let you know I enjoyed your description of how poor old Scooby's nose got tickled with the feather, and the nice pictures! You really have a way to illustrate Scooby's tickly nose... Keep up the great work!  :)

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Re: NEW Scooby Doo Comic & Story, MESSY! Sneeze Torture (M) Nose Stuck Scene!!
« Reply #5 on: September 24, 2020, 02:17:40 AM »
I love how you draw Scooby so sneezy and messy. Its great <3
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Re: NEW Scooby Doo Comic & Story, MESSY! Sneeze Torture (M) Nose Stuck Scene!!
« Reply #6 on: September 24, 2020, 03:51:41 AM »
Thank you CC007, I'm glad you liked it ;D.
 
I know I'm late, but I wanted to let you know I enjoyed your description of how poor old Scooby's nose got tickled with the feather, and the nice pictures! You really have a way to illustrate Scooby's tickly nose... Keep up the great work!  :)


Thank you Kiku, better late than never ;D.  I'm so glad you liked the story and the picture ;D.  I'm a little embarrassed to say this but that was my favorite Scooby Doo comic in a very long time  :-[.

I love how you draw Scooby so sneezy and messy. Its great <3
Thank you RustySteele.  It's kind of like she is in a mucus shower HEE, HEE :-[